Milestone 2: First two scenes complete
After working on the script and observing various resources on how to create them I have finally completed the first two scenes of my script.
To verify their quality I have sent the screenplay to my English teacher (Mrs Keightley) to read it over and suggest improvements.
Overall I am happy with how the scripts is coming along, the dialogue is very Elmore Leonard and the actual direction has mad use of slug lines, camera position and other meta elements to a larger degree.
After completing this I think improvements I will make to my current work is to scout out my locations and make sure that Will (my cameraman and producer) is still on the project as without his go ahead I will not be able to access the farm set I need for the film. Furthermore I will start practicing the choreography needed for the film's duel scenes. After having done this scene there is now four others for me to write and then I will have completed the script - after which I can storyboard and finally film my work
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